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Author Comment: Don't try to cheat Char Char
[Reply] mdg245, March 26th, 2010, 4:42 pm

She'll find you! I'm mean she's a teleporter for goodness' sake!

Fun Facts:

Char Char is 8 years old and belongs to a specics called the Teleporters. Many Teleporters don't realize they are one, but just think they have a special power. Others have been told by their families or friends who know of the species.

More fun facts about Teleporters:
When they travel between realms, their form changes to the dominant species of that realm. Depending on how many dominant species there are and for which area they belong within the realm contribute to the species they take form of. Char Char knows vaguely of her past because of her mentor, Mr. Freenlock. One more major thing about teleporters: only the females can teleport.

Alright, next page will be tomorrow or Sunday.

Sonic and Tails belong to Sega, sprites ripped by Daniel Sidney. Char Char created and owned by me.

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[Reply] Bruce the Hedgehound, March 26th, 2010, 5:04 pm

Better job on Miles' text box.

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[Reply] mdg245, March 26th, 2010, 5:06 pm

Reply Yeah, I did the 2nd darkest shade on Tails for the text.

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[Reply] Bruce the Hedgehound, March 26th, 2010, 5:13 pm

Much better improvment! EZer to read.

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[Reply] Ghost Fox (Guest), March 31st, 2010, 11:24 am

Two pages and the Plothole-O-Tron meter soars!

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[Reply] mdg245, March 31st, 2010, 4:42 pm

Reply @Ghost: Plothole-O-Tron meter? What do you mean by that? That I didn't do all that stuff? Its because 1: I hadn't really made up a plot for that in particular; 2: I wanted to get straight to the story and the actual Eggman plot was not really important to the story.

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[Reply] Ghost Fox (Guest), April 1st, 2010, 1:06 pm

Okay, so you've given the reasons for leaving out the Eggman confrontation after Char-Char warps them to him. Yet even though there are two good reasons behind leaving that part out, it still leaves one, gaping plothole. But hey, on the bright side inputting your response into my Hyperkey (an ingenius device of mine) has made its Plothole-O-Tron meter plummet to minimal levels. In layman's terms, the plothole is not as hurtful to the plot as I thought.

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[Reply] mdg245, April 1st, 2010, 4:30 pm

Reply @Ghost: Thank you. And if you really want me to come witha story I guess I can and post it later but if you don't really need it then I ask you just let me continue, leaving the Eggman thing out for now.

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[Reply] Ghost Fox (Guest), April 27th, 2010, 10:10 am

Final Reply. (that means conversation ends!) OH-KAY! So Eggman's put on wait-and-see for now.
I already have an idea for his next eeviil plan. HINT: It has something to do with Char and the Chaos Emeralds...

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[Reply] Lugbzurg, June 6th, 2010, 3:47 pm

You know, it may have been better to show us all that stuff found in your author comment to be in the comic gradually as time moves on. It's quite interesting, so you should show it. The whole thing about changing to the dominant race kinda makes me think of how the TARDIS would work if The Doctor would actually take the time to fix it!

Though, you may want to try a name other than "Teleporters" as the race as it's not exactly the kind of name that would go to a type of creature, and, as you said, the males don't teleport.

But I want to see this and I think this is all developing quite nicely, already.

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[Reply] mdg245, June 6th, 2010, 3:51 pm

Aww thanks! I plan for it all the be revealed in the comic but Char Char doesn't even know all of it. And the reasons their the Teleporters is cause thy didn't have a better name to give themselves. Technically I guess they'd Raiorians.

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[Reply] Lugbzurg, June 6th, 2010, 3:52 pm

Yeah, well (Wow, that was fast) it shouldn't be hard to do since you haven't mentioned it officially, as in... in the comic, itself.

I make up names like this all the time. I could give you something that sounds like such a race if you want me to.

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